Clear and concise subject lines
Why subject lines matter
The subject line is the first thing recipients see and often determines whether they open your email. For users with disabilities, clear subject lines provide essential context about the email's purpose and urgency.
Good subject lines help users:
- Understand the email's purpose before opening it
- Prioritize emails in their inbox
- Find specific emails later through search
- Navigate their inbox efficiently with assistive technologies
Writing effective subject lines
Effective subject lines are specific, descriptive, and action-oriented. They should clearly communicate what the email is about and what action, if any, is required.
Key principles:
- Be specific: Include relevant details like dates, project names, or meeting topics
- Use action words: Start with verbs when requesting action
- Keep it concise: Aim for 50 characters or less when possible
- Front-load important information: Put the most important words first
- Avoid all caps: Use sentence case for better readability
Examples
Good examples
For requests:
- Action needed: Review budget proposal by March 15
- Action needed: Approve time-off request for April 10-14
- Please confirm: Meeting attendance for project kickoff
For information sharing:
- Update: Website maintenance scheduled for Sunday
- Reminder: Staff meeting tomorrow at 2 PM
- New policy: Remote work guidelines effective January 1
For meetings:
- Meeting: Quarterly review - March 20 at 10 AM
- Agenda: Marketing team meeting - March 15
- Reschedule: Client presentation moved to Thursday
Good practice ends
Bad examples
Too vague:
- Bad: "Update"
- Better: "Project status update - Week of March 10"
Not specific enough:
- Bad: "Meeting"
- Better: "Team meeting: Budget planning - March 20 at 2 PM"
Missing action:
- Bad: "Document"
- Better: "Please review: Q1 performance report"
All caps (hard to read):
- Bad: "URGENT - PLEASE RESPOND IMMEDIATELY"
- Better: "Urgent: Response needed by 5 PM today"
Bad practice ends
Using action words
Start your subject line with clear action words when you need the recipient to do something. This helps users with disabilities understand immediately what's expected of them.
Effective action words:
- Review: Review contract terms by Friday
- Approve: Approve expense report #1234
- Confirm: Confirm your attendance at training
- Complete: Complete survey by end of week
- Submit: Submit time sheets by Monday
- Update: Update your contact information
Indicating priority and urgency
When something is truly urgent or has a specific deadline, include this information clearly in the subject line. Use priority indicators sparingly to maintain their effectiveness.
Priority indicators:
- Urgent: For time-sensitive matters requiring immediate attention
- Action needed by [date]: For requests with specific deadlines
- Time-sensitive: For matters that need attention within a day or two
- FYI: For informational emails that don't require action
Note: Avoid overusing urgency indicators. If every email is marked urgent, none of them seem urgent anymore.
Best practices
- Write subject lines that stand alone and make sense without context
- Include specific dates, times, and project names when relevant
- Use sentence case, not all caps or all lowercase
- Keep subject lines under 50 characters when possible
- Put the most important information first
- Use action words for emails requiring a response
- Be consistent with your organization's email conventions
- Update subject lines when email topics change during conversations
- Test how your subject lines look on mobile devices